I am almost done with the first draft of my story . It is an epic/hard fantasy story about a girl who can steal other people's pain and shame, but cannot be free from that pain unless the person who gave her the pain dies.

I expect the story to total about 45k words. I will release it as when I am done.

Is anybody interested in being a ?

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I'll venture in to the option to beta it. Any timeframe deadline needed for feedback? Or just preferably asap?

New question. Content/story review or grammar/structure or both?

@tw2113 Mostly content/story. I want to make sure the story is understandable and that readers don't get confused.

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