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I’m realizing that at its heart, this POV arc is a #mystery #WhoDunnit. Part of the problem with the post-midpoint scenes is that only one suspect remains, making the story seem like it’s stalled until the protagonist figures it out.
Among other things, I need to maintain the mystery. Make sure other suspects are guilty of and hiding something, just not the main thing. I can already tell the #SecondDraft is going to be much stronger. I’m learning so much.