I am experimenting with form and narrative in writing.
Form: I am experimenting with writing a story using simple words and a simple plot and directing the reader's emotions as little as possible by not using emotionally-loaded adjectives.
I don't know if it comes across as child-like writing or something.😥
this was an interesting read and I especially liked the ‘golden mist’ part.
Somehow I had difficulty reading the second-person present-tense style of the story. I’m more used to third-person past-tense narrations with descriptive scenes. **It felt disorienting as if the writing was taking me in a car I couldn’t control**
Keep up the experiments 😇
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