@jane I so appreciate your feedback. I worked on it a long time. I am afraid that so many projects have taken me from caring for it, that is providing it new work. My only contribution has been a recent short story (a character from a much larger piece I am wrestling with) which you can read here if you'd like (always like feedback 😉 ) https://geoffreygevalt.com/fiction/pinkham-december-24-1947 #writing #writingexchange
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