@jane no worries. I am happy to do so in the future, when I have time. Clearly you are a strong and confident writer. You are succinct and to the point, yet you have depth of thought and logic. All good.
We improve our writing when we willingly open ourselves to feedback and put our egos in the back. And when we give others feedback we begin to see our own work with less emotional eyes. I would love to figure out a way that we could regularly provide each other feedback on #writingexchange
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