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How does everybody feel about prologues?

Love them? Necessary evil for some stories? Or should we just relabel them as ‘Chapter 1’ and not prologue?

I just realised I can add a form! So I will ask again:
PROLOGUES
Love them? Necessary evil for some stories? Or should we just relabel them as ‘Chapter 1’ and not prologue?

@Michaelvaliant I voted "I love a good prologue" with the emphasis on "good." Many prologues are not necessary. Labelling a prologue as Chapter 1 is obvious and not a good idea. However, there must be no other way to tell the story as effectively (the story won't make sense without it). But they must be written very well. Writers should ask themselves if they're starting the story in the right place and, if they decide to include a prologue, be confident that it's necessary and well-written. 😊

Michael Valiant ✅ ⚔️🚀📚

@sdramsey @kfoxx_writes how subjective do you think ‘good’ is when it comes to prologues? Is it just personal@opinion, or is there a right/wrong craft way to do them?

@Michaelvaliant Excellent question! So much of this industry is subjective. Foreshadowing, hinting at the conflict to come, setting the mood/tone, providing a key piece of information (perhaps that can't be known by the narrator) that will make sense later on as things start to come together--these are good reasons to include a prologue, but if there's a way to weave it into the story at another point, then it means the prologue isn't really necessary. If it's to introduce action and pull...

@Michaelvaliant ...the reader into the story, and then start chapter one at a slower part of the story, then it's sort of "cheating" and perhaps the story isn't starting in the right place. In any case, the prologue should be short and serve a very important purpose in the setup of the story.

@Michaelvaliant Agree with @kfoxx_writes 100%. And I think one thing you *don't* want in a prologue is a long chunk of historical background for which the reader will have no context (and let's face it, no reason to care). I think that's a trap a lot of fantasy novels fell into in the past. A good rule of thumb: can it be skipped without impacting the reader's understanding and/or enjoyment of the story? If so, might as well leave it out. :)

@sdramsey Yes, Sherry! No info dump and if it can be skipped without impacting understanding of the story then no need--absolutely agree. 😊